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What do you say to a spirit stuck in limbo?
Ended October 9, 2024 • 18 Entries • Created by AJAY9979
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What do you say to a spirit stuck in limbo?
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kpsplaha

Tween

You aren't for the Heavens yet

But no longer for the Earth either.

The goal of your existence unmet;

Your experiences, no more wiser.

But don't look back on the barren

Discarded, decaying garden of hope.

The branches of love now fallen

And romances on a slippery slope.

For when it's the day of Death

We move on to worlds apart.

So, don't waste another breath

And no longer take things to heart.

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anav

Gray

In the dim light of a forgotten alley, I stumbled upon a figure shrouded in mist. The air was thick with an otherworldly heaviness, and I felt an unshakable pull to approach. It was then that I realized: this wasn’t just a trick of the light; this was a spirit, trapped in limbo.

“Are you here to help me?” the spirit whispered, its voice barely a sigh in the stillness.

“I… I don’t know how,” I replied, my heart pounding. I had come to this city searching for something—answers, solace, or perhaps just an escape from my own turmoil. I never expected to find a soul in need.

“I’ve been here too long,” it continued, its form flickering like an old film reel. “I linger between worlds, caught in the memories of my life. I can’t move on.”

“What keeps you here?” I asked, my curiosity mixing with empathy. The spirit seemed both fragile and weighty, a paradox of existence.

“I was… forgotten,” it said, eyes shimmering like distant stars. “I lost my way when my family abandoned me. They didn’t understand. They left me behind, and I couldn’t let go of the pain.”

The revelation struck me hard. I too had felt abandoned, left to navigate my own labyrinth of grief and regret. I thought of my own family—how my father’s departure had cast shadows on every corner of my life. I stood there, frozen, connected by our shared experiences of loss.

“Maybe you need to forgive them,” I suggested, my voice steadying as I felt a surge of determination. “Or maybe you need to forgive yourself. Sometimes the past holds us captive.”

The spirit hesitated, and for a moment, I could see the flicker of hope in its ethereal gaze. “Forgiveness… It feels impossible.”

“Maybe it starts small,” I encouraged. “A single thought, a moment of understanding. You were not meant to carry their choices forever. Your life was your own, and you deserve to let go.”

“I don’t know how,” it whispered, sorrow folding around it like a cloak.

“Just try,” I said, my voice growing stronger. “Imagine them free, living their lives. Imagine yourself free, too. What would that look like?”

For a long, haunting moment, the spirit stood silent. I watched as it seemed to wrestle with the weight of its memories, eyes searching the void. The mist around it began to shimmer, and a soft glow emerged from within.

“I remember… the laughter,” it said slowly. “The way the sun felt on my skin. I remember love.”

The fog thickened, but instead of trapping it, the mist began to lift. I felt a rush of warmth as the spirit smiled, a bittersweet expression of release.

“Thank you,” it breathed, voice barely audible above the rustle of the wind. “I think… I can finally let go.”

With that, the spirit transformed, its essence dissolving into brilliant light that danced and spiraled upward. It shimmered like a thousand fireflies before bursting into a constellation of sparkles, vanishing into the night sky.

I stood alone in the alley, the air lighter somehow, filled with a sense of peace. I thought of the spirit’s journey, of how it had found a way to rise above its pain. In that moment, I realized that maybe I, too, could learn from this encounter. Maybe I could forgive the ghosts that lingered in my own heart, the burdens I carried.

As I walked away from that forgotten place, I felt a newfound determination swell within me. The grey area of my existence, once heavy with shadows, began to shift—blurring the lines between past and future, sorrow and hope. In that alley, I had encountered not just a spirit, but a mirror reflecting my own path toward freedom.

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Katiemurnett

Be Free - Haiku

Your fight is over,

Someday we will meet again

But for now, be free

- My childhood dog passed a few years ago and if she were in limbo I would want her to be free rather than be stuck, I will see her again soon. -

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dctezcan

Gray

I find myself

stuck all day

the sun may shine

but i see gray;

there are no colors

there's barely light

darkness surrounds

although it's not night;

heavy and slow

i drag around

air so heavy

i feel i may drown,

in tears like rain

that blurs and clouds

grayscale watercolor

that cloaks and shrouds,

hides yellows, greens and blues,

holds reds and oranges at bay

no purples, no pinks, no joyful hues,

forever and always, only gray.

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7v7

In the Microscope

We looked closely...

having struck dynamo

an excitement scientific

among all the laboratorian

Aha...finally! a spirit

stuck...

in slide!!

an authentic sampling

cross section, aye

between glass

its parts wriggling

and jiggling

we see turning around

as little space allows

for what seem

like hands

face, feet!

a nose it has

elbows and

it kneels

it kneels!

deaf and mute

and we are also

in the microscope

gapping...

dumbstruck

09.17.2024

Grey area challenge @AJAY9979

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Ferryman

Letting Go

He walked past her again. It almost felt like he was walking through her. She cried out to him, begged him to stop, but this was going to be another day of the silent treatment.

He slammed the door and headed to work. She stood at the window, watching him back away down the driveway in his new truck. He refused to talk to her about the purchase; he just showed up one day several weeks ago, the dealer sticker still in the window.

He hadn't spoken to her in over a month.

She looked out at the neighborhood. It had gotten to be fall without her even realizing that the weather had cooled. Leaves gathered in silent blankets, warming the earth.

She felt a chill, and went back to bed.

______________

She'd been sleeping more, lately. It was unusual for her, but she'd somehow slipped into a deeper darkness than she'd ever experienced. She'd been depressed before, but this was different; black days didn't begin to describe it. She'd sleep, she'd awaken. He'd ignore her as they watched television, when she actually joined him downstairs.

Most nights, he'd fall asleep on the couch, a highball glass with remnants of an ice cube giving testimony to how he'd spent another one of his evenings. The empty Glenlivet bottles were lined up in a windowsill.

The ghostly green was absurdly beautiful in the setting sun.

One night, seized with a frustration that words wouldn't cure, she grabbed one of those empties and flung it at the wall.

Finally, he looked in her direction, eyes bleary, a gasp on his lips and a trembling tumbler in his hand.

A rorschach of whiskeystains colored the offwhite sheetrock. Little divots formed where the bottle struck and shattered; verdant shards rained to the hardwood. A glass garden bloomed on the kitchen floor.

She didn't speak, but wailed tears of sorrow, anger, and sadness.

She was angry at mourning the loss of the two of them; she was angrier at his apparent lack of concern for their love slipping away.

He just looked at that rorsharch on the wall. A study of himself, painted in single malt.

She went back upstairs, crying herself to sleep.

______________

Winter came, and nothing improved between them. He started missing work some days, and those bottles began to line the floor beneath the window.

She refused to clean up after him.

She sat down in the chair opposite the couch one day when he slept past his alarm. She reached out to turn off the television, but it smoked and smouldered under her fingertips, and it died on its own. She snatched her hand back, expecting a shock, but she felt nothing. Where it had been blasting on about some winter storm on the Weather Channel, now there was only silence and the smell of ozone.

She just sighed.

One more thing gone wrong.

She tried to wake him, but he wouldn't stir.

She couldn't remember the last time he'd slept in the bed with her. His only trips upstairs were to dress, and even those stopped when he moved everything he needed into the guestroom.

She was a heavy sleeper, and the depression she'd slunk into forced her to stay in bed most days.

"We need help, babe." She said, hoping he'd engage her.

He just rolled over, curled away from her, shivered, and continued to sleep on the couch.

"I'm going to leave if we don't try to fix this."

Nothing. He reached for his blanket on the back of the couch, still sleeping.

She knew it was a lie. Despite all this darkness, she loved him still.

______________

Time was a slippery thing to her in her depressions.

When the snow began to melt, the man from the bank came. She refused to open the door, but looked out the peephole at him. He left an orange flyer above the knocker.

She went back to sleep, and the tears took away the worry.

She awakened to the ear-splitting noise of reversing alarms on a truck.

A Uhaul sat in the front yard, but she was too tired, too sad, to care anymore.

She slept again.

______________

When she awakened, everything in the house outside of her bedroom was gone. Echoes greeted her creaking steps down the stairs, and she cried out in fear, in shock, and in such incredible, aching remorse that she felt her heart shatter just as a windowpane above the kitchen sink did.

He'd left her bedroom, and moved out around her.

She collapsed in the living room in a heap, wails filling the air and blackness coloring her world.

______________

She felt like she was being torn apart.

Sleep disappeared, and dreams were replaced with the sound of Latin being spoken downstairs.

Latin?

It echoed throughout the emptiness of the house below her. Inside, she ached. Physical pain tore through her, and she screamed, despite trying to listen.

The Latin stopped, and the clinching in her gut relaxed.

She stumbled to the stairway, and looked down into the living room.

Strangers gathered, surrounding a priest.

He looked at her.

At her. He smiled.

It was the first real contact she'd had since...

And memory flooded her.

______________

Images of she and her husband.

He was driving, she was holding his hand.

They were just going to the store; a beautifully mundane ritual.

He said something and she laughed.

And then it happened.

______________

The priest spoke to her.

"Hello, Melanie."

She didn't reply.

"These are the Murchisons. They own this house now. They asked me to bless it before they move your bedroom out, and they move their family in."

"Mine," she managed to croak, tears flowing.

She noticed the couple cringe, and the man, Mr. Murchison, she presumed, shivered. They were young; they reminded of her of how she and her husband looked back when.

"GET OUT!" she managed to yell, voice cracking through tears.

The young woman began to cry.

The priest just continued to smile, and he took a step closer.

"Melanie. You need to go Home. You need to let go of this place."

The Latin resumed, and the last thing she heard:

"Go with God, Melanie."

"Amen."

And she let go.

The house disappeared from around her, and sadness was a distant whisper.

______________

A tractor trailer blew through the red light.

It hit the passenger side of the car at somewhere around fifty miles an hour.

As the noise died away, so did she.

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4N

Postcard to my Friends in Limbo

We're having fog up here as well

Yep. Persistent fog. It dampens, past

the skin, perspiration, permeates the brain

We forget things too, time, we waste aways

but what am I saying? pls forgive me, I get it

in Limbo these things aren't the issue...

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pchiefc

Untitled

When you tear down the walls

that blind you from seeing your true self fully,

you’ll have made the first brave tick

in your soul stretching from beyond its comfortable classroom.

And therein comes the awakening –

an itching mental freedom.

And never could you want anything more.

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Vyxyn

You there!

Yes you!

Misting up my hallway,

Moaning all hours of the night!

Stomping and scatching and

scaring the bejeebers outa my kids!

Well you can just stop it right now!

I have had it up to here with all your creepy, crapy cryin and so on!

You've had your little fun but if you dont walk into the light right now, so help me im gonna call out the Hell hounds and have them rip you a new hole in your "sheet"!

Now i mean it! Trust me when I say

"Hell hath no fury like a mother who had no sleep!"

So get into the light or face my wrath!

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knitmisstress

Through the Gray

I see you lurking in my dreams

Stuck between, neither here nor there

What is it you need?

What question should I heed?

What do I say to send you on your way?

You seem so sad, even a bit mad.

Behind grey fog, no, maybe even smog

Broken, of course, you could not stay

You did not need to go

I forgive you, you know

For all the reasons you thought were good

For actions beyond your iron control

For the hurts and pain

And your total distain

Because you are not who once you were

Go! Peace be with you

You’ve earned the right to respect this life

And if by chance our souls should meet once more

I’ll love you still

I always will