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Writing to escape. Reading to learn. I don't even know what I'm talking about.
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In my last challenge, it was to write a micro-poem ... this time, it's a little harder ... write a mini micro-poem, consisting of no more than 55 characters of which include all letters, numbers, symbols, punctuation, and spaces between words (The title and return/enter key does not count.)
This can be on any topic, but anything over 55 would be classed a a micro poem, not a mini micro-pem. Make sure you tag me so I can read what you have written and don't forget to tag me this way: @Danceinsilence, otherwise I may never see it. (NOTE: Add at least some additional words underneath in parens as it will not accept anything under 15 words.)
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vinnysmalls in Poetry & Free Verse

War From Far

Tone Deaf

Drone Deaf

Blind to the Felony of Atrocities

(was thinking of making the title shorter)

Challenge
Write a true micro-poem ... see specific details ... this is a think-piece.
According to Wikipedia, the more recent popularity of "micro-poetry" to describe poems of 140 characters in length or shorter appears to stem from a separate coinage, as a portmanteau of "microblogging" and "poetry". Hence this is the challenge, counting spaces, commas, periods and letters. Write a micro-poem no longer than 140 characters. (This does not include the title). It should not be any longer than 30 words maximum (though I have allowed for two additional words if needed.) but it should fall within the range of no more than 140 characters. It can be on any topic/subject. (I will be counting and spaces count as a character). Don’t forget to tag me in the comment section … @Danceinsilence.
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vinnysmalls in Micropoetry

Together

When we yell together

The collective NOs are turned into echos,

We will rebel against those

Together with our friends and foes.

Challenge
What fictional character would you want to have as your personal bodyguard and why?
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vinnysmalls in Fiction

Man Of Steel

I would want Superman as my personal bodyguard because I have always believed in Aliens.

Challenge
Write a short love poem. The catch is that the first sentence must have seven words, and the following sentences should countdown until you have only one word for the last sentence. Basically 7 words, then 6, then 5, etc.
Love comes in numbers.
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vinnysmalls in Micropoetry

Amore Mio

She spoke softly as she touched me,

Even though it was my hand,

My Insides warm and fuzzy,

In this foreign land,

She is beauty,

Breathtaking, clever

Forever!

Challenge
I'll post a picture, and you write a story about the character in 50 words ...
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vinnysmalls

Spectacle

She hated them! She absolutely hated her new Glasses, and she didnt find it funny that her husband was laughing at her misery. Ususally she is smiling and happy. She was emotionless as her husband took the photo, her torment was his ectasy. Its ok petty revenge was her favourite.

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vinnysmalls in Poetry & Free Verse

In Flowers

I think it was the mountains, and clean air,

I watched her gaze, She watched my stare.

In a strange land no friend for a frown,

It was truly fate when paths crossed in that town.

She said "Ciao", I could barely speak,

I was struck, my knees were weak.

As time passed She took many different forms,

The most recent got married after telling me She was torn.

When you see her you will know what I mean,

 She's beautiful, She's smart, She's a dream.

So for now ill keep wondering and wandering the night,

Looking for her smile, that Love at first sight.

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Lucy.

Before God stood the four generals; There was Gabriel who was strong, powerful and loyal. Michael, the bravest of the bunch also honest and smart. Rafael is highly intelligent and has a deep care and love for all of Gods creations. Then there is Lucy, she is Heavens fiery disciplinarian.

God explains to the Generals that humans on Earth are straying from the original plan. The plan of Love, Peace, and Joy. A world created for humans, protected by humans.

God gives the four Generals new assignments. Gabriel is to be the messenger between Heaven and Earth. Rafael is sent to protect and heal the people. Michael is to stay with God in Heaven as the top adviser, Consigliere if you will. Lucy is dispatched to oversee the newly formed Underworld. A place where all of the undesirables will be sent from here on out.

Lucy is the perfect fit for her new role. She is also glad to be away from Michael as the two are constantly at odds over everything. There is some history between them but both are tight lipped about it, however everyone knows she feels scorned.

Lucy receives new souls on a daily basis. She welcomes them in and sits with each one to get their side of the story. After all she has to make sure she is not wrong in the matter, she must always be right.

The souls are first led to a holding area, a dimly lit, damp room of rock. The smell of wet mold and iron on the walls is almost overwhelming. Lucy likes to serve them whatever worldly desire they last crave, whilst explaining to them what form of discipline they will be receiving for eternity.

This makes the souls feel at ease. She then opens a large black marble door which shows them their eternal damnation. As she stands behind the dark soul she whispers in the sweetest, most amazing, soothing voice, "Enjoy Hell". In that split second the mood changes from one of extreme bliss to eternal torment and shattering fear, as she proceeds to kick the ever deserving soul into its rightful pit of fire and endless torture.

Occasionally Lucy laughs to herself, and never feels bad. If there is ever any doubt in her mind she rubs her lucky Goat Horns. She received them as a gift from God before taking her beloved post on the throne of the underworld. She wears them around her neck, on a necklace, more for intimidation than anything else.

There were people on Earth that didn't believe in a Heaven or almighty God. those souls were her favourite to receive. The good ones of course would be greeted in heaven for an eternity of happiness and an amazing afterlife. The bad ones however, well that was right in her wheelhouse. The looks on their faces were priceless. She would snap selfies with them and add the caption "SURPRISE!" as she posted them online. Michael didn't find it funny at all, but God would smirk.

There were also people on Earth that worshipped her. Lucy could never understand this. Why would anyone want an eternity in hell? Although she would never admit it, everyone knew she liked the attention. When these souls got to her they were in awe of her immense beauty. Her long dark hair, dark eyes and her soft skin, which has a slight red tint to it, as she is always around a burning fire. Lucy would immediately send these souls back to earth as something vile and horrible, only to repeat the process over and over when they continue to die. That was their hell never getting to be in actual hell. She got a kick out of it even if it was a nuisance. 

As time inevitably moves forward, Lucy continues to grow fond of her role. She is a perfectionist and takes pride in her job. She still communicates with God, mostly through social media, she finds its the perfect medium for her. She knows with every soul she collects and recruits she gains another star on her shoulder. She becomes more powerful everyday in Gods army, she is after all Gods Underboss.