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So there I was...
Give me the greatest first-person hook of all time, starting with "So there I was..." Three sentences maximum.
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Ellier1002

Driving

So there I was ... staring into your bright blue beautiful eyes as we drove down the desserted highway. The bitter taste of my betrayal seeping deeper and deeper into my skin with every breath shared in the cramped interior. But you keep driving, eyes staring down the dark path, unaware of the battle being raged beneath my paper-thin skin.