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Poetic Form: The Pantoum. @sandflea68 suggested I post this challenge so we may try our hand at this form. Here is a little background on the style from poets.org: www.poets.org/poetsorg/text/pantoum-poetic-form . Please tag me in the comments, @PhynneBelle #pantoum
MahaliHodil

Slow Swing

Three lonely

Lovers are

There in an

Empty room.

Lovers are

Dreaming of

Empty room's

Sexiness,

Dreaming of

Fantasies,

Sexiness,

Otherness.

Fantasies

Keep for the

Otherness

Sacred place,

Keep for the

Lovers the

Sacred place

Of the dreams.

Lovers the

Roses, thorns

Of the dreams

Fondle in minds.

Roses, thorns

Bloom when they

Fondle in minds,

Become fierce.

Bloom when they

Are not to

Become fierce

From regrets,

Are not to

Make mistakes

From regrets

Of missed love.

Mistakes made

From bad luck

Of love missed.

They got lost

From bad luck:

Three lonely,...

They got lost

There in.

Three lonely

Lovers are

There in an

Empty room.