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Ok, although I know most of us can be very critical of ourselves, I think we all have a favorite or favorites of our own work. Maybe we posted one that didn't get very much feedback. That is what this challenge is about! That one that slipped by! There may be more than one, but just pick the best and post it here. If you feel like it got neglected or you're just very proud! Post the best poem you feel you ever wrote on Prose! Don't forget, tag me
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plum in Poetry & Free Verse

Execution

O Muse let us scream tell us the story of blind-eyed

blessed girl whose thoughts tremor with each breath she

Forces from her closed throat as though the heavy-metal guillotine were

to be held by Hades, forced with poppy-seeds down her esophagus

so she holds him company for six forsaken months- to the weary of her

cracked-tan skin. He gives no mercy only presses tighter and

in her head she feels him pushing her brain from indulgence

Sending impulses and electricity with a ferocious-intensity;

there’s something she hasn’t felt for months. And she feels

everything and nothing and she feels the mass that keeps her

weighted down, the wholeness of a being that can only

be what defines the person. Still she swallows deeper resists further

and Zeus knows all the infinite-atoms which vibrate in fear-

shaking when she listens, and exploding when she speaks.

There exists a threshold. It ropes her in

with each quiet-crackling of resolve- o Glorious Muse

pity on this poor blessed girl whose eyes scorch from her torn fingers,

she rubs until she can recognize her own disintegration ;

Hunger leeches off of the negativity that builds in the vast softness

of her gut, while she push-pulls away from herself until

the Gods have learned to keep the fierce beasts gated- they feast

And she learns not to bite the hands that feed.