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Shook
Ended May 11, 2017 • 4 Entries • Created by Just_Call_Me_Al
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sandflea68

Hitchhiker

Hop in my truck

     standing forlorn in pouring rain

     wet face gnarled with pain

     tears cleaning tracks of dirt

     couldn’t wash off ingrained hurt

     thumb stuck out without much hope

     praying he’d be thrown lifesaving rope

Hop in my truck

     he was cold and “shook” to his bones

     I said, “Get in,” in comforting tones.

     “Where are you going? I’ll drop you there.”

     He mumbled, “I’m going almost anywhere!

     Just take me to a place of rest

     I just need peace – that’s my quest.”

Hop in my truck

     he climbed into the passenger seat

     closed tired eyes and went to sleep

     I kept on driving down lonely road

     wanting to help him carry his load

     when he woke, we were across state line

     he asked to get out, said he was fine.

Hop out of my truck

     I pressed a few dollars in his hands

     watched him set off for unknown lands

     turned on the radio and I was “shook”

     to find out hitchhiker was escaped crook

     I gave some thought but didn’t turn him in

     Who amongst us is without some sin?

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butlersteph

Reconstruction

The

ground beneath

the bones within

my battered old spirit

your words shook them all

leaving behind total destruction and wreckage

a lengthy process of recovery

picking up broken pieces

binding the fragments

again creating

wholeness.

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Roo_isWho

Shook

She gently layer her head down

Hearing the sounds all around her

Outside her window and

Outside her door

Karma is taking her down

She was mean

Her and her friends were "queens"

Over all the people

Over everyone they knew

Keeping them "inline" was all they did

She felt she was right

How terrible the world is

Obviously someone had to rule

Obnoxiously she hounded those below

Knowing deep inside she wasn't right

She is crying now

Horrible things are happening

Oblivion took her over

Obsession ruled her mind

Karma will end her

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Shook
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Evannn

shook

I was in the hallway. I was headed to second period English; Mrs. Seigworth. Then I saw her. Megan. 

I called out to her, "Megan! Teach me how to smash!" 

She entered her classroom. She was shook.