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Write a tanka (5-7-5-7-7) about a starry sky on a brisk autumn night. Use some form of the word 'tremble'.
Ended November 23, 2016 • 4 Entries • Created by SmellySalts
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Write a tanka (5-7-5-7-7) about a starry sky on a brisk autumn night. Use some form of the word 'tremble'.
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SmellySalts

Fall Back

Where has the moon gone? 

Did it not shine yester-eve?

Lucid stars tremble 

Horizon to horizon 

Lord, how long have I lain here?!

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Write a tanka (5-7-5-7-7) about a starry sky on a brisk autumn night. Use some form of the word 'tremble'.
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PhynneBelle

grey sky barrier

between me and racing thoughts

god stifles a yawn

and the heavens open up

each star assured in its grace.

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Write a tanka (5-7-5-7-7) about a starry sky on a brisk autumn night. Use some form of the word 'tremble'.
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Sansfire

Celestial Children

Your cold stars hold fire

The way they reveal the divine right

Of celestial birth

Eyes fluttering, loving

Mother Nature, Father Time

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Write a tanka (5-7-5-7-7) about a starry sky on a brisk autumn night. Use some form of the word 'tremble'.
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Letting Go

Hanging from the tree

holding on with fading strength

the remaining leaves

shake loose and accept the air

drifting underneath the stars.