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Write something that will make me (chose on of the following, or all, or a few): 1. Laugh 2. Cry 3. Be disgusted 4. Feel inspired 5. Beg for more
Ended April 6, 2015 • 3 Entries • Created by StellarBee
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Write something that will make me (chose on of the following, or all, or a few): 1. Laugh 2. Cry 3. Be disgusted 4. Feel inspired 5. Beg for more
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Lupe934

#3 Be Disgusted

His rotting flesh came off as the rats tugged on it. The man's eyes were being clawed out by the rats. The rats knew exactly why they were being put in a room with several dead bodies. They just didn't care. They wanted to eat and to be warm in the freezing room. Clawing him open and fitting snugly in his body would help. And, it was ever lasting food. Eyeballs, livers, hearts, stomachs, and much more. They loved it, so why would they stop? Oh, right. Because the bodies were poisoned. And everything that was edible for the rats was horrible. The organs had puss and green slimy substances. The body itself had numerous openings were infection had spread. Yet the rats didn't stop. They still ate and ate and ate. They took everything until only bone was left. They wanted to stop. And they wanted to leave. But the shot given to them before they were put in there made them eat and "want" it. But it was a fake feeling. That's what the scientists and doctors wanted. They wanted the artificial feeling so that soon, they could use this for humans. Humans would have the desire to eat anything they see. Even each other. The scientists and doctors believed this was the only way to stop overpopulation. And so, with a last look at the finished "bodies", they made headed towards the waiting patients that needed their shots.

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Write something that will make me (chose on of the following, or all, or a few): 1. Laugh 2. Cry 3. Be disgusted 4. Feel inspired 5. Beg for more
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RaneMcC

Well...

When lobsters have baby they lay on their back in the bottom of the ocean, and with legs open they spray baby lobsters like a confetti cannon.

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Write something that will make me (chose on of the following, or all, or a few): 1. Laugh 2. Cry 3. Be disgusted 4. Feel inspired 5. Beg for more
MamaT

Poor ‘Was’

An editor armed with an active verb

Once cut a passive 'was' at the nerve.

"Too many 'was-es', she cried,

as she punctured its pride,

"To hell with a neutral nerd!"