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REWRITE
Rewrite any of my post and tell me which one you wrote!
Ended May 14, 2021 • 6 Entries • Created by confusedsince10
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BonnieBoo

Watch me smile...

Do you think the damage you have done bothers me?

Do you think I will even notice when you walk out the door?

Don’t worry, I won’t waste any time after you have gone

My phone will be blowing up with all my new contacts

If I find something you’ve left behind I’ll let you know

But don’t ask to see me when you come to pick it up

I will leave it on the porch beyond my locked front door

Just don’t cry when you realize how much you have lost

@ajrfanz This is your post “Dont watch me cry” rewritten

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Notebook

NF INTRO III (rewritten by ajrfanz)

FEAR (to NATE): ...I told you I’d leave when we die, and we ain’t died yet!

NATE: I’m not in the mood for this.

FEAR: You don’t like the prison I built you?

If you didn’t want me to live in your house, you shouldn’t have let me move in!

NATE: I told you to keep your mouth shut.

*Digs a hole*

FEAR: Wait a minute, you don’t really think for a second

That you’re puttin’ me in this?

NATE: I don’t know why I waited--You’ll spend the rest of your life in my backyard, tellin’ me you want your room back!

...I thought you had me in prison this whole time,

But now I’m the one holdin’ the keys.

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voiceinthewind

Society’s Opinion

You've got to watch your weight girl

Cause everybody see's

You've got to keep attention

or they'll bring you to your knees

The whole world's superficial

Because they can't see what's inside

You've got to keep your corpse attractive

while you scream until you've died

They tell you that you're ugly

They rate you 1 to 10

They put you on a scale

It's no use to defend

It's society's opinion

but you just can't let it go

And every place you set your foot

Everybody knows

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REWRITE
Rewrite any of my post and tell me which one you wrote!
Chi

Fortune and Gold

A king on a throne without rubies or gold

is hardly known as a king at all

But God whispered to me about kings with little things

they have not a throne but are resistant to fall

If dimes define the law and love of man whose hardly grown

then he struggles and weeps for other love not shown

The man who takes the time and reads the lines

finds worlds between them waiting to unfold

The mysteries of life lie in the lost and the found

and knock glasses with those who might seem without

See there is no key for my castle or ticket to nights stars

so let fall your lashes and feel the winds of true fortune upon you

Rewrite of ajrfans' $<happyness

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Rewrite any of my post and tell me which one you wrote!
KC95

Rewriting “Skinny :(“

You want to be skinny, but to be honest I kinda like you fat.

When you order 6 burgers with extra large fries, it’s pretty hot.

Why have you let thoes girls get inside your head? So airbrushed, so fake.

I like to pinch your chubby cheeks, they always made you look so cute. That line from that song you like dancing to: “boys like a little more booty to hold at night”? Well it’s true! I love the way your ass feels under my hand, I love squeezing it, caressing it, giving it the odd little tap, you can’t do that with skinny butts, well I guess you could but it wouldn’t be nearly as fun.

Plus size is called plus for a reason, it’s a positive not a negative, a blessing not a curse, own it! The way you used to do.

Now come my love, let’s get you that burger, let’s have a race to see who can fit the most fries in their mouths just like we used to.

Throw the diet pills away, you don’t need them anymore, you never did.

Throw thoes magazines away too while your at it, focus on thoes who care, we love you, there’s no fat shaming here.