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How do you exactly perceive loneliness?
Write any type of writing (poems, short story, statements, etc) about how you feel about loneliness. How would you exactly describe this feeling of loneliness in your own words? Is it sickening? Punishing? Comforting? Is it exactly the same as being physically alone?
asters in Stream of Consciousness

Twisted Strings

A trap wide open but sounds meekly comes out,

Jittering somatic sensations without stop

Coffee breath finding a way to you, a route

Exchanging two cents of gossip. Without a doubt,

word makes it back to you and, drop,

the door, feelings meekly come out.

Skipping stones, walking lunges, out and about

But eventually a massive statue, a prop

that’s an obstacle to you on the route

At sunrise, sit down muffled in thought

Slowly collecting 2 weeks of morning dewdrops

but see the air bubbles still meekly come out

Moonlight, in my dreams you reach out

But I falter while attempting to reciprocate, plop

I fall in the rabbit hole, an endless route

Today the sky boasts the moon and sun’s clout

A string bounds then together, until chop

Scissors wide open, and memories meekly come out

Hoping the other string finds a way to me, a route

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Challenge of the Month XLII
Two words for this one: Long poem. Winner will be decided by likes, and the panel. We know, we're complicated. Anyway, long poem of yours, about anything at all. 100 big ones for the winner. GO.
asters

I see

The little boy

Drowning

As he walks

Further in

The ominous lake

Where piranhas

Are swimming

My paint brushes

Stroke shades

Of black against

The canvas

As I see

Him return

5 times a day

To the fog

Could it be

He has found

Happiness

In this illusion

Could it be

If I follow

Him

I too

Will become

Delusional

When the clock

Strikes the time

For him to come

I follow

And into the

Fog

I see a garden

A haven

Of lilies

A scene with

Colors that

My paint palette

Can’t resemble

Looking back

In a toothy

Smile

The little boy

Hands me

New colors

A paint palette

With so much potential

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