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15 word challenge; Bedtime Story Ideas.
In 15 words, create the setting and characters for the perfect children's bedtime story.
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Shutters comb sun rays

to stripe a face

bent down in prayer

to God .

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1 Chronicles 17:5 For I have not dwelt in an house since the day that I brought up Israel unto this day; but have gone from tent to tent, and from one tabernacle to another.

Matthew 8:20 And Jesus saith unto him, The foxes have holes, and the birds of the air have nests; but the Son of man hath not where to lay his head.

What do these two verses together mean to you?

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Word Hospital
Revive one of your old writings ^-^ Re-post or re-write an already established work. Poetry or prose, 15+ words.
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How could I give up on what He gave me?

Challenged, but I triumph by God’s power everyday

He’s greater than problems that I face.

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For the New and Young people who have recently (6 months or less) joined-Prose. FYI: I check every single entry for length of time. I only allow Under 6 months as a member. One year if you are young and it is stated on your profile. Do not worry about 'likes' this challenge is monarchy. Thank you, Benz
It warms my heart when I see young people who have recently joined our amazing writing group- Prose. It restores my faith in poetry, knowing it will live on. Think of this as an english class and I am the teacher. Please share with me your 'own' poem, that has never before been in any challege or published here on the prose. It can be about anything. Poetry only (I prefer verse, with an awareness for simple grammar) although it is not mandatory. I will read each piece thoroughly. Please tag me after you have entered. Please be patient if I do not review the same day you enter. I want to give every write the attention it deserves. *Everyone will receive a review. I am not a writing expert, reviews are based on my own experience of reading and writing poetry for many decades and what I have learned from my editors. *These reviews are my opinion. Thank you and have fun! -Benz
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Trunk

The branches rest peacefully occasionally rocking at the visitation of a gentle breeze.

They it make it seems as though they’ll always be

It calmness perpetuating this fallacy

It acts as though it doesn’t know what’s coming next

Maybe because it doesn’t

It’s a paradigm of continuity

Standing in the same place it did yesterday and ten years before that.

Same place for a long time?

Not stagnation if you look in the wrong direction

Don’t look around

Look up

It’s a paradigm of continuity

Taller than it was two months ago and two decades before that

growing it did

Until it was “grown” (you’re always growing)

Taking on a new purpose as it did,

It now shades the people it sat under as a seed

This is a tree

This is change

The branches rest peacefully occasionally rocking at the visitation of a gentle breeze.

They act as they’ve been

Endurant

Its calmness perpetuating this characteristic

It acts

But to reflect that it’s a paradigm of promotion

From nothing to something

Challenge
Music can speak to people in different ways
Choose any song, and write what it means to you. At least 15 words, and please make the song you use as your title. Nonfiction or fiction, poetry or prose, just let the music speak to you and express how it makes you feel.
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Running

It's by Sharon Tembo. The call to turn back to God is what this song embodies.

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The branches rest peacefully occasionally rocking at the visitation of a gentle breeze.

They it make it seems as though they’ll always be

It calmness perpetuating this fallacy

It acts as though it doesn’t know what’s coming next

Maybe because it doesn’t

It’s a paradigm of continuity

Standing in the same place it did yesterday and ten years before that.

Same place for a long time?

Not stagnation if you look in the wrong direction

Don’t look around

Look up

It’s a paradigm of continuity

Taller than it was two months ago and two decades before that

growing it did

Until it was “grown” (your always growing)

Taking on a new purpose as it did,

It now shades the people it sat under as a seed

This is a tree

This is change

The branches rest peacefully occasionally rocking at the visitation of a gentle breeze.

They act as they’ve been

Endurant

Its calmness perpetuating this characteristic

It acts

But to reflect that it’s a paradigm of promotion

From nothing to something

Challenge
Tell me a story in 15 words.
This time using only 15 words tell me the most complex story you can. Example: A soldier may come home, but if defeated, why return?
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Challenged, but I triumph by God’s power everyday

He's greater than problems that I face.

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Metaphorically Speaking
Concoct a brilliant metaphor in under 150 words.
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Doing a Little bit More.

Inaction can make us a spectator to change; sitting too comfortably as pigeons do on a phone line.

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Out of the frying pan
You got out of the frying pan, but where did it land you? Give me a sizzling 200 word scene.
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Favored, flavored, and.....athletic.

Rather than meeting its new habitat on dry paper towel, the plantain somersaulted off of the spatula hitting the counter and swiveling on the surface in a perfect figure eight before teetering at the edge of the counter to preface a potentially new yet unwelcome residence--the floor. Missing the warmth of the stovetop and the camaraderie of its fellow plantains, it quivered undecidedly in hesitance of what to do next. After a few minutes it looked up as the bottom of an outstretched hand became its ceiling. Aware of being lifted from the countertop by the weightlessness of its surroundings, the horizon of this favored and flavored food's view brightened as it landed on a new surface. Content but still expectant for more adventure, the plantain nosedived from the edge of the plate and found itself amidst shiny utensils. In a reflection from a spoon’s concave surface, it turned from side to side in approval, looking admirably on its new tan. Beautified by its impeccable brown color with dark areas that lined its outer edges and followed by more textured lines that ran done its side and into the middle.