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Prose Challenge of the Week #18: Write about murder. The winner will be chosen based on a number of criteria, this includes: fire, form, and creative edge. Number of reads, bookmarks, and shares will also be taken into consideration. The winner will receive $100. When sharing to Twitter, please use the hashtag #ProseChallenge
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The hidden fire

This story is about a murder with magic fire that never is seen by any mankind except for its terrified victims...

The story starts out in a very small town with vast fields with creaky barns and this little boy named Jonny went looking for his mother that went missing a couple months back and a couple days later at their door step was a box full of ashes that was a little burned from something hot like and the sherif came to investigate his name was sherif Johnson he told Jonny and his father that Jonny's mother was most likely dead but Jonny did not give up until one day he was starting to search the darkest creepiest barn in the town there was a legend known for people not coming back out of the barn so he took the risk and there he saw a little light coming from the top of the barn and he went up to check it out and there he saw a terrible sight for a boy his mother in the glance of the fire dieing from the fire so he got closer and closer and and he started to hear his mother crying and screaming " help help" and as he got closer and closer it got louder and louder and he heard the door behind him shut and lock and the barn Windows close and then the whole barn caught on fire and when the police and the fire department arrived at the lot where the barn creepy barn sat only found one of Jonny's shoes and ever since then if you go there you can hear screaming of Jonny and his mother

By: kamren

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