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GoodMrJ
An explorer and adventurer. Savours solitude and silence, but also busy bustling bodies.
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Famous First Words: Write a great opening line to a novel.
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GoodMrJ

I was twelve years old when I realised that I was going to die one day; and the nights have been darker ever since.

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Drabble me this. 100 words of fiction. Not 99, not 101, not 847. One hundred words precisely.
100 words of fiction. Not 99, not 101, not 847. One hundred words precisely. On choosing the winner, I couldn't care less about popularity and likes. I care about the storytelling. With a good side dish of solid grammar and following the rules of sticking to a hundred words.
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The last words.

With a flourish of the wrist, he lifted the ornate calligraphy brush from her naked flesh. He knew she'd approve were her eyes not shut. All their last night's intimacy inked out on her lithe, body. The passionate, dark, and forbidden acts. He'd written only where clothes would cover so she could keep the words longer.

Once they were dressed, her makeup immaculate, he gave a final kiss. They wouldn't meet again. He left into cold blue light of pre-dawn, sending a voice message to his business partner.

"The body is prepped for the funeral today. She's in fridge four."