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You are renting a room in someone’s house as you transition to living in a new city. The owner tells you that the basement is completely off limits. You start hearing noises coming from the basement at night. After several days, curiosity overcomes you and you sneak downstairs to see what is going on. Explain what you find and what you do next Write in any genre that you wish. Tag @sandflea68.
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Eleven

I fell completely in love with the old Victorian house with the gingerbread trim the first time I laid eyes on it.  When I saw the "for rent" sign, I just knew I had to live there until my new apartment was ready.  Knocking on the front door, I was greeted by an old arthritic gentleman who kept telling me to speak louder.

"I'd like to rent your room for a couple of months," I requested in a raised voice. "I'm starting a new job and I'm waiting for my place to become ready."

"Under one condition," the elderly man intoned,  "The basement is completely off limits!"

I agreed to his condition and moved into the historic house, wondering if it harbored any secrets,  Soon, I began to realize that something was off kilter in this ancient place. "Eleven, eleven, eleven,"  the harsh chants emanated from the basement.  I racked my brain to figure out was 'eleven' meant with no success.  I wondered if it referred to the number of rooms in the old house which totaled exactly eleven.  Maybe a previous owner had had eleven children.  Perhaps the basement had eleven boxes of antiquated clothes belonging to a past owner.  I looked at my calendar and realized it was October eleventh so I took this as an omen that I should explore the voice from the basement that night while the owner was asleep.

I was surprised to find the basement door unlocked and crept stealthily down the stairs to the basement.  It was empty except for an old furnace and some boxes of books.  While I was in the far corner, I heard, once again, the voice moaning from under the darkened stairs, "eleven, eleven, eleven."  I was petrified because I knew I had to use the stairs to go back upstairs. I crept over to the stairs to peek under the risers before chancing going up the steps.  All of a sudden, a long arm reached up and pulled me under the stairs which were scattered with bones and torn clothing.  An invisible force compelled me to stay there where I, too, soon became skeletonized remains.

"Twelve, twelve, twelve," droned the disembodied voice.  I did not hear it!

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