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Write a free verse poem: When you said ...
Write a 12 to 21 line free verse poem about something a parent, sibling, or significant other said to you that was surprising to you. Begin the poem with the line, "When you said ...." Remember, free verse poetry doesn't follow strict patterns or conventions such as meter or rhyme scheme.
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Sick in bed

When you said that should we never touch again

You would still come around

I was not so much surprised at this saying

But I stared amazed

At how much I believed

In you and in

This, and at how I had good reason to

As I leaned into you leaning

On the kitchen sink

Each little light on in your parents’ house

I recall nights the moonbeams hit

Your eyes just right

And made me want to seep into your bones

And I remember, too

Days you wiped my snot with your hand

And clutched me to your chest

I blubbered and scratched

And you cried I love you I love you Grace

You are an unmade bed

Tousled & still warm, and I

Fully intend to return to you