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Monthy Poetry Challenge for April.
Write your longest poem. Winner is decided by likes, and will receive a crisp $10.00 -String us along until you're done with us.
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ModernAntigone in Poetry & Free Verse

The Women in the Trees

Let me tell you the story,

of the women in the trees

A girl,

draws water from a well

the forest, all temperate and windy in the mountains draws back

her rebozo sticks to her arms

clay pot jabs against her waist

things are done differently in the mountains

water-slick hands

dirt and masa beneath her nails

she's only thirteen

that's old enough

A grandmother,

older than the revolution

tucked herself away during the Cristero

old enough to remember when men dangled from the trees,

sits

frowning

kneading at stone

mortar and pestle

push and pull

there was no electricity, yet, not in the mountains

The girl,

her granddaughter

pours the water into the adobe lavadero

splashes her skirt a little

no running water yet either in the mountains

The grandmother,

kneading

cross dangling from her neck

on her knees, penitent flattening masa

tells her

to go get more

everything is done by hand here in the mountains

The girl,

chipped clay pot in hand

twin braids,

the way her mother used to do

does as asked

twisting and pulling

rope stinging her calloused palms

she's only a child

but she's got hands

like she's been working since she was born

A man,

wanders out of the arboles

swaying trees that break apart for him

he calls out to her

a glint in his eye

a friend, he calls himself

The girl,

she hoists up her pot

and her skirts

and tells him that he's gone the wrong way

preparing to run

The man smiles,

and descends upon her

you want this, he says

i want you, he says

it's love at first sight, he says

and wraps his arms around her

she screams

she runs up the hill

fast feet can only do so much

against a man

he catches her

the clay pot shatters

it was a different time, but we knew it was bad even then, in the mountains

he hurts her

simply

angrily

she claws and screams and bites and cries

jagged edges of clay digging into her back

The man,

wild-eyed

blood-hungry

sinks his knife

over and over in her chest

until she is more wound than girl

The grandmother,

runs down the hill

down the ranchero steps

past the chickens

past the trees

flour stuck to her fingers

shrieking the name of her child's child

he stabs her

forty-two times

they only have open-casket funerals in the mountains

her arms

are covered in defensive wounds

grandmother-skin all worn and sagged

sliced open

to the bone

her daughters,

away

what a tragedy, whispers the chismosa

stand quiet

at the viewing

grandmother and granddaughter, abuelita y nieta, laid out like wounded angels

takes two days before the viewing is over

before the Church says it's alright to bury them

their refuge is in heaven now

The man,

flees

before he can be strung up

there are no police in the mountains

The daughters,

hear

whispers,

convocations,

allegations,

of the man who did it

a slip of tongue

a twist of fate

word of mouth

he who hurts is here

this was how we did things in the mountains

braided hair, just like their mother's mother

knives belted to their waists

poised low in the trees

lying in wait

as the man,

walking home

along the dirt road

gnawed on a nectarine

pit and juices jutting against his teeth

daughters,

mother-blood hot and angry

descended upon him

his nectarine, laid in the red dirt, an afterthought

as they drew into him

and cut