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How it started and how it’s going
1.) Share a link with your very first post here on Prose. 2.) Write a follow-up piece that highlights where you currently are in life (any aspect) in comparison to where you were when you started writing here. Any format. Please tag me :)
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We All Have Walls

see at https://www.theprose.com/challenge/3593

We all have our walls.

Some of us let one wall drop, revealing our audiences.

Some of us let two walls drop, allowing opposites in, demanding we choose.

Some of us let three walls drop and think we can hide behind the one remaining.

When some of us let all four drop, what our walls have heard is no longer secretive and we're exposed, for better or for worse.

Those who let no walls drop are doomed to pace relentlessly, getting nowhere, within windowless, door-less constraints.

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Follow-Up: New Walls

Some walls drop and some remain

Some in ruins and some in pain

Labyrinthine passages direct me onward

Byzantine battering reroutes me forward

My box grows walls in whatever direction

Fibonacci calls, by whatever'y reflection

Grant myself light from windows in my walls

Plant my self-sight of hallowed births en caul

Comparison

My first piece here on theprose.com (July 2016) was the above, "We All Have Walls."

See at https://www.theprose.com/challenge/3593.

The follow-up, written seven years later (December 7, 2023), reflects on how the world is not so simple and not so much all about me. We are not performing for an audience, but are growing by the applause or, alternatively, the tomatoes thrown at us. At some point, we see the light through the previously obstructing walls and will be fulfilled (have sight of the hallowed births) — births of your self-actualization through the prophecy ("born with the caul") of what you see when seeking the righteous way.