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Poetry: Describe a Suffocating Love
Describe a love that is either good or bad, but make it well known that one of the two or both of the parties feel suffocating at some point, whether to each other or to the reader to the point of annoyance. Bonus points if you can make them a couple that stays together regardless, it just ups the ante.
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brkbillst42 in Romance & Erotica

The Complexity of Toxicity

I can't breathe

because I love her

but she's a gold-digger

And now I don't have money for my inhaler

We're just friends but she's been mooching

Now I'm gonna confront her and stop smooching

her bum

But not before I get an inhaler.

Then I'll be the suffocator

Causing asphyxiation with words.

We'll make an agreement as usual

But this time I'll hold her neck to it.