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Poetry: Describe a Suffocating Love
Describe a love that is either good or bad, but make it well known that one of the two or both of the parties feel suffocating at some point, whether to each other or to the reader to the point of annoyance. Bonus points if you can make them a couple that stays together regardless, it just ups the ante.
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InvisibleWriter in Romance & Erotica

suffocating

you wanted a relationship where we would both make each other worse

and damn, if that wasn’t something that we were good at

thrown together like magnets

polar opposites

impossible to pull apart

but I dripped anger

and you spilled lies

and I burned the love letter you wrote me

but my favorite compliment is still the first line

when you called me intelligent and intimidating

and I realized that I’ve never felt more seen

but we’ve both learned to spit daggers

our words sharp

we love the fight more than each other

But you’ve never let me steam roll you

and it means that I won’t leave