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monologue only
Try and write a story or a piece with no detail, no places, no descriptions, and no context. the only thing you have is people talking. You may find this is a bit hard or maybe not. At the beginning please say if this is 1st, 2nd, or 3rd person. Also, try to make the title as vague as possible.
Adinawrites

Inbetween

'You look alone and forlon, what is your concern?"

"That's not even a proper rhyme."

"No, it's not, you dipshit, but it's the only time I'll ask this question. Either suck it up and tell me or don't - I'm fine either way."

"They found out about me being inbetween."

"What do you mean, inbetween? That doesn't make sense."

"Can you tone it down a bit? I don't want them to hear me."

"Who is them?"

"Them! You know who I mean, isn't it obvious? They know I'm inbetween two worlds, okay? That I'm barely existing, like a half human, like a gh-"

"Sh-! Are you insane talking about this? Here of all places?"

"Well, you wouldn't take a goddamn hint, how was I supposed to tell you?! Oh no, I think someone saw me whispering-"

"Which one? I told you it's stupid to manifest right here, you can't switch places if they know-"

"It's too late, I'm feeling the pull-"

"No! How will I reach you the next time I'll need you?"

"Don't know... can't remember already. Did we know each other? I'm feeling heavy..."

"Yes, we did! Give me something I can use to contact you. A feather, a stone, a goddamn signpost, just something like you always did!"

"No, I'm too shapeless by now, see? T'was nice knowing you. Goodbye..."

"No! Are you there? I can't see you, did they come for you? Did you go to the other half? Can you hear me??"

"..."

"..."

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