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Hook Me! Part 2
Write an opening paragraph to a gripping book or novel! (I will not be judging the entries, but rather the winner will be chosen by who gets the most likes on their post)
emilyandrews22 in Fiction

The People I Left

The international store was as dim as a cave, dust collecting in every worn crack and crevice, as if it were falling apart from the inside-out. The people matched, cigarette ash on calloused hands and ages of words, conflict, conflicting words, etched into their faces as heavy wrinkles. As a child, the store was a respite from the majority white town my mom and I grew up in, and I would dash through the store as my mom warned me to stay close, run my little fingers through the loose produce-- garbanzos, peanuts, green almonds. I found out that the same people I now worked alongside saw me there when I was a tottling child.