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First Line Prompt: Use this sentence to springboard your Horror piece "He Watched, Helpless, as the door closed behind her."
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TheSixthMonth in Horror & Thriller

13 Creature Lane

He watched, helpless, as the door closed behind her.

                                                        ___________

                                                       May 5, 1988

     "Allison, come on! It'll be fun!"

     "No, Kyle! I really don't want to do it! It's not safe!"

     "Allison! Don't be such a killjoy! Let's have an adventure!"

     "Ugh...fine! Okay, fine! I'll come with you!'"

                                                         ____________

                                                      September 3, 1987

     "Welcome to senior year Biology! I'm Mr. Blanck. We actually have a new student joining us this year! Class, this is Allison Crane. Everyone, say hi."

     "Hi, Allison!"

     "Allison, introduce yourself."

     "Hi, everyone! I'm Allison, obviously. Haha. Um, okay. I'm from California, um... I'm super excited to be here, I love this town already! Um, I like swimming and painting. Um, I think that's it, yeah."

     "Go sit next to... Kyle Danover. Kyle, raise your hand. There."

                                                        _____________

                                                           May 21, 1988

Psychological Report for Kyle Danover

Psychiatrist: James Hooper

Age of patient: 17

Kyle is mostly unresponsive. Very quiet. Terrible nightmares. Extremely traumatized. I doubt that he will ever fully recover from this. Increase quantity of pills?

                                                       ______________

                                                     September 10, 1987

     "So, Allison. Um, do you want to hang out after school?"

     "Sure, I'd love to!"

     "Meet you at my house?"

     "Cool!"

                                                       _______________

This Weird House

      The Condemned House on 13 Creature Lane 124th Issue, May 1, 1988

13 Creature Lane, the only house still left standing in the old section of town, was abandoned 10 years ago after resident Jane Lindsay appeared dead in it. The courts ruled that her husband, Alfred Lindsay, was the murderer, but he denied it, saying that "a monstrous wolf hybrid" mauled his wife to death. Our journalists were unable to get into the house, but report that the house seemed to be falling apart. It is in very bad shape, and we advise that all people should stay away from it.

                                                         _______________

                                                          January 17, 1988

     "Allison, what's your favorite thing to paint?"

     "Oh, I don't know, Kyle! There are so many beautiful things out there!"

     "Isn't there one thing that just makes you so happy to paint? Come on Allison, you can tell me!"

     "Well, I love sunsets. The colors are just so beautiful. I don't think I'm good enough to recreate them perfectly."

     "Allison, you're the best artist I've ever met!"

     "Oh Kyle, that's sweet!"

                                                            ______________

The School News - Go Flying Beavers!

               By Kyle Danover                                                     The April 1988 Issue

     Congratulations to Allison Crane, who placed first in the county-wide art show! Her painting, Sunset, captivated the judges! Good luck to Allison in the state-wide art show in June!

                                                          ________________

                                                          December 16, 1989

Psychological Report for Kyle Danover

Psychologist: James Hooper

Age of patient: 19

Kyle has shown little improvement. Has a few moments of clarity, but still has nightmares and is mostly unresponsive. If Allison is mentioned, will either go into a catatonic state or become extremely violent. More pills?

                                                          ________________

                                                              May 5, 1988

     "Oh my gosh! This is a bad idea, Kyle!"

     "Come on, we're already here!"

     "I read about 13 Creature Lane! Somebody died here!

     "Are you scared, Allison?"

     "Maybe I am, okay? The house looks like it'll fall apart. And there are rumors of a weird animal here! Can we just go?"

     "Let's go up the steps!"

     "Kyle, come back! Those don't look safe...Kyle! I'm coming!"

     "Let's go in!"

     "No! Don't - aaah! You broke the door! Why are you such an idiot- No COME BACK! Get out of there! Ugh, Kyle!"

     "Allison, this place is crazy cool! Look at that!"

     "Okay, alright, that's a cool chair. Now can we leave. Ugh, and he's going down into the...basement? Kyle!"

                                                   _________________

                                                       April 30, 1988

     "So, have you decided about college?"

     "No, Allie, I haven't! You're going to that really cool art academy, and I only got an offer from that one place that I don't like!"

     "Kyle! First, don't call me Allie! And second, that's a beautiful school! And the journalism program, which, let me remind you, you got accepted to, is great! I think you should go!"

     "Really? I mean, I really do want to do journalism..."

      "Definitely do it!"

      "Thanks, Allie! You're a great friend!"

      "It's Allison, and you're welcome!"

                                                 ___________________

                                                       May 5, 1988

      "I hate this place, Kyle! We have to leave!"

     "This is a pretty cool basement, Allison! Seriously! And there's a door that leads to outside, I guess. Oh look! A pile of... bones?"

     "Ew! Gross! We need to get out of here!"

     "No, come on! Weird, those look like human bones!"

     "Oh my God! Oh my God!"

     "What?"

     "R-r-run! It's the wolf from the magazine! AAAAAAAH"

     "AAAAH! Come on, run!"

     "Get the door! The door! Ow!"

     "Allie, get up! Hurry! It's coming closer!"

    "Run away! RUN KYLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

     "ALLISON!!!! NOOOOOO!!!!!"

     "AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHH"

                                            _____________________

                                                    May 5, 1988

                     He watched, helpless, as the door closed behind her.

                                             ____________________

                                                     May 7, 1988

                                       Sad News for Our Community

       Allison Crane died on May 5th after entering the 13 Creature Lane House with Kyle Danover. Crane was mauled to death by a gigantic wolf creature, while Danover was able to escape. He is currently in the nearest hospital recovering from trauma. He may be transferred to a mental institution if further treatment is required.

                                          ______________________

                                                    August 19, 2000

Psychological Report for Kyle Danover

Psychologist: Elena Kastner

Age of patient: 30

Kyle is more responsive, but still gets horrible nightmares. Must be watched very vigilantly, can become easily violent. I asked him about Allison today. He just stared at me blankly. Improvement? It was his 30th birthday today, and it doesn't look like Kyle will ever celebrate his birthday anywhere but the mental institution.

                                              ____________________

                                                      January 13, 2015

they think I don't understand they think I'm a complete idiot but I'm not I know what's happening they think this will help me they think writing will help me I wish it would, Allison please know that I miss you you were my best friend i'm so so so sorry so sorry please forgive me so sorry best friend i think something's wrong in my mind i don't understand they may be right please help me Allison please so sorry best friend my fault should have listened so sorry my fault

                                                ___________________

                                                       May 4, 2015

Psychological Report for Kyle Danover

Psychologist: Gwen Opagnia

Age of patient: 45

Kyle held a normal, coherent conversation with me today! No violence for the past few weeks! This is real progress! I'm excited about this! He uses his journal every day, I think it's really been helping him!

                                            _____________________

                                                    May 5, 2015

it's the anniversary of your death i don't know which one but they told me it was so i'm feeling sad but i think i know what to do to fix it Allison i'm so sorry it was my fault but i can fix it im so sorry my fault

                                             ______________________

                                                        May 6, 2015

Coroner's Report

Patient's Name: Kyle Danover

Age: 45

Time of Death: 11:25 pm, May 6, 2015

Cause of Death: Repeated stabbing with a nail

Notes: All evidence points to patient pulling out a loose nail from his bed and repeatedly stabbing himself with it.

                                            ____________________