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Hook Me
Write the best hook to the beginning of a novel. Must start with the words "As my world burned...". No longer than three sentences. Tag me!
Rodney4hk

As it always goes.

As my world burns to ashes around me I held Crystals hand as the paramedics and police approached us. Smoke and fire still waring in the house I built went into the sky like demons released from a curse box. If only I knew how to stop it, how to stop the war between me and the Berkerson brothers but now how could I, retaliation is a must forgiveness is impossible now, and they destroyed my fish tank too!

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