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Hook Me
Write the best hook to the beginning of a novel. Must start with the words "As my world burned...". No longer than three sentences. Tag me!
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As my world burned, I stood, rooted in the flames surrounding me. My skin, seared and singed, turned into nothing more than piles of charred ash. My screams of anguish pierced in my ears, begging for a savior, but all you heard was a whisper of my name.