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Critique Me
Submit any type of prose or poetry with the express purpose to have it critiqued and suggestions made to improve it or submit it somewhere for publication. If you are brave enough, critiques will be sent to you by private message. 250Word MAX.
Writainter

City of Death

Paris, oh Paris

The city of Love

the city of Lights

Tell me your story

All blood and gory

Paris, oh Paris

Share your secrets

beheaded sleepless

dark below your

gilded domes

the thronged catacombs

Paris, oh Paris

Viking treasures

Stolen far away

Never heard in

the light of day

Paris, oh Paris

whisper to me

let me see

in the aurora

your plethora

of unknown hidden

Paris, oh Paris

I don't need

to look far

to find your

savagery

Paris, Oh Paris

City of Love

City of Lights

Leave nothing out

Paris, Oh Paris

The City of Death