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re-written past
Alright, so here's the challenge. Take your oldest piece here on prose, blow the dust from it, polish it and give it another life. Show us what you started with here. You can refresh, change its length, or simply edit your work a bit (especially if it has been years since anyone had a chance to see it) or just leave it as it is because for you it's perfect. And tag me so I can see your entry ;) Ps. I will join in as well
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daisydu in A Writer's Path

Shadow dance

The imperfection is a journey

leading to Perfection

My unconscious mind is like an upside down black umbrella,

hoarding onto all the unfinished past lives’ storylines

Time to flip this lopsided umbrella—

raining cats, dogs

within my subliminal shadow side.

Fumbling, bumbling

beneath the mysterious

subconscious iceberg

Exploring this immense terrain

within my inner foggy soggy...

untouched underworld.

Shaking hands with all the faulty imperfected selves

Allowing all my inner naughty kitten, clumsy puppy

a chance to

explore some fresh insights

out of the wide opening world.

Embracing every quirky cute animals within me

Set them free…

Swimming among the multitude beauty of this

inner union-ship.

Humming along the joy of my heart,

dancing out the rhythm of my soul.