PostsChallengesPortalsAuthorsBooks
Sign Up
Log In
Posts
Challenges
Portals
Authors
Books
beta
Sign Up
Search
Challenge
Write Ugly
Whether its with choppy sentences, weird topic, or in your characterization/dialogue, write something ugly. I put in a lot of effort to make my writing sound good and feel rhythmic, making my prose almost poetic. I'm tired of it. Please write me something to inspire off-beat styling. Please tag @wabisabi, I'll be choosing the winner.
Profile avatar image for d1ss0c14te
d1ss0c14te

pounding and pounding and pounding and

spiraling

down down down down down

so deep

so deep

so godsdamn deep you'll never find me

never see the light of day

of day

of day

of night

this is night

night

eternal night

darkness swallows me up

swallows

swallow the pills

swallows soaring in the sky

sky high

high as i can go

i can go far away

go far away

leave me alone

alone with my thoughts

my thoughts tear me apart

torn apart by your words

your words carve into my skin

carve cuts into my skin

the cuts sting

my head pounds

pou ndin g and pou ndin g and pou nding and

spirali ng

d own d own d own d own d own

so de ep

so d eep

so gods damn dee p yo u'll nev er fin d m e

nev er s ee th e lig ht of d ay

o f da y

o f d ay

of ni ght

th is is nig ht

nig ht

ete rnal n ight

darkn ess swal lows m e up

swallo ws

swallo w th e pi lls

swall ows soar ing i n the s ky

sk y hi gh

hi gh as i ca n go

i ca n go fa r a way

go f ar aw ay

lea ve me alo ne

alo ne w ith my tho ughts

my th oughts tea r m e ap art

tor n apa rt by yo ur wo rds

yo ur word s car ve in to my s kin

carv e c uts in to m y ski n

the cut s sti ng

m y he ad pou nds

po u ndi n g and po u nd in g and pou n ding and

spir ali ng

d o w n d own d o wn d o w n d ow n

s o d e ep

s o d ee p

so go ds dam n dee p yo u' ll ne v e r fin d m e

nev e r s ee th e l i ght of d ay

o f da y

o f d a y

of ni ght

th is is n ig ht

nig h t

e te rnal n ight

da r kn es s sw al low s m e u p

sw a llo ws

s w al lo w th e pi lls

sw a ll ows so a r ing i n the s ky

sk y hi gh

hi g h as i ca n go

i ca n g o fa r a way

go f ar a w ay

lea ve me alo ne

al o ne w it h my th o ugh ts

m y th ou g ht s tea r m e ap art

tor n ap a rt by yo ur wo r ds

yo u r w or d s ca r ve in to my s k i n

ca r v e c u ts i n to m y sk i n

t h e cu t s s ti ng

m y he ad po u n ds

po u nd4i n g and po u nd in g and pou n ding and 46 4 ay

yo u r w4 or d s ca r ve in to my s k i ng and 46

spir 68

d o w n d own d o wn d o w n d ow n

s o d ee p8p6

s o d ee 3p89

23so go 3 ds dam53 n dee p 5yo u' ll ne v e r f74in d m e

5o f 4da 26t of d ay5

2so go 3 ds dam3 n 35ee p 5yo u' ll ne v e r f74in d m e

6nig h t6ht44356882f d a46 s ee th 4868 l i ght of d ay

nig h t

4

da r kn es996 s sw al low s m e u p

s o6 d ee p898of d468 ay s ee th 468 l i ght of d ay

s w al lo 834w th4686e 4pi lls

da r kn es8 s sw4 al low s m e u p p the s ky

7sk y hi g23h

6hi g h as i55235 ca n go

i ca6 n 8 o fa r a way

tor n a4p a6ca r 4v e c u ts8 i n to m y sk i ne

sw a 8ll9 ows so a r ing i n the s kyart

m y th ou g ht s tea r m e ap art

tor n a48p a6ca r 4v e c u ts8 i n to m y sk i n

6yo u r w or 8d s ca r ve i6n t4o my s k i n

ca r 4v e c u ts8 i n to m y sk i n

8t h e cu t s s t6i ng

m y he ad4 325p58o u n ds4

m y he ad4 2p58o u n ds4s4

pounding

and pounding

and pounding

and pounding