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Chills
This one's simple: Write something that gives me chills, with a spooky twist or eerie atmosphere.
LordOsyrys in Horror & Thriller

Unfaithful

The fog swept through the towering trees

And the wind blew her down onto her knees

Slowly, behind her he dropped his hand

As her tears poured down, drenching the sand

The slightest sliver of joy on his face

Shone through the moonlight’s serene grace

He uncocked the safety on his gun

And said “This is the revenge of everyone”

She cried still harder, begging for life

“Not after you tricked me, you horrible wife”

All that she’d done raced through her brain

As she looked at the sand that she had now stained

“I’m sorry!” she cried, “I didn’t mean to do it!”

But the man just laughed; he saw right through it

“You knew every second your doings were wrong

You now know that you don’t have very long.”

“All I can say is I really loved you.”

He laughed again, knowing that it wasn’t true

As he tightened his grip, her sobs got bigger

That was when the man pulled the trigger