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Hear the reader's voice as they read your work
Imagine the reader reaction to something you write. Write a piece that includes the reader's voice. This was inspired by a conversation I had about erotic writing, for which I wrote a piece.. the link is below, as I didn't especially want this to be about erotica. It's just that mine fitted in with what sparked the idea! Hey!" And don't be modest... enjoy! x
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Trousers

Elementary School Teacher

My daddy has a lot of people come over. They don't stay very long. They sit next to the coffee table.

So far this little girl's punctuation is good.

Daddy and the people always call each other "mann."Daddy brings them little rocks to the coffee table.

Oh shit.

Sometimes they talk too fast and I can't understand them. Sometimes they get real exited. Most of them have bad teeth. They should go to the dentist, but they give Daddy their money!

Oh shit!