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Rewrite Me!
Take one of my pieces (your favorite, one you think you could do better, one that would be interesting in your own voice, pick one at random, i don't care) and make it your own! I am really excited to see what you all do with my words. I will be reposting everyone who enters, and I will choose the winner. Much love <3
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Glamastro

Overmeyou

While I slept, you found your way above me and held onto my throat with your heartless hands.

“Please stop!!” I begged you to withdraw.

The classic, evil, sadistic smile etched your face. You looked like a complete maniac.

“Why should I?”

“Because you and I, we’re literally the same person”.. I yelled with my broken, coughing tone.

“Then why do I want to kill you?”

You made the kind of face which people make when playing dumb, and you were playing an insane amount of dumb, you knew why you wanted to take away my life, and I totally understand, afterall, we are the same person.

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I wanted to say why, but my voice would’t let me.

You broke the silence...” I don’t like you, and you don’t deserve to live”

I thought “If I die, you’d die too...”

And that was it, the death of two personalities, but one human.

Original writing:

https://theprose.com/challenge/8987/best