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Illusions of water
Use water as your driving metaphor, simile, force - just no literal waves I’ll be reproving and reading all entries. So. No prize, but all of my followers will see your pieces, so sharing the love <3
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VaehKay

Figurative Language Using Water in a Dark Representation

Please stop, please stop, please stop

The drippining of their blood like a leaky pipe

Their reflection on the metal bin like still water

I couldn’t stop myself

I lost as much control as waves on a stormy night

I just swept them away like water clearing forgotten names in the sand

Without hesitation

Im sorry, but what’s done is done