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Song Line-Up
I like playing this game with my sister: we'll play music at random and make up a story out of the titles, artist names, lyrics, or general themes of the song lineup. Any length, any number of songs, any format. I'll post a sample. One rule: have fun :) Tag me in a comment if you want a reaction.
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thedivinevi in Stream of Consciousness

LUCY

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Luce, can you hear me?—

’cause I’m trying to reach you

and they’re saying

you’re long gone away.

They say, Lucy’s underground—

but they’re wrong,

aren’t they?

You’d not be caught dead

in some half-dug grave, brought low

by hunger to brimstone and flame.

No, no—that was never your way—

so I’m sure it’s only that you left

for the sky, to swim

like you used to

through the heavens’ blue eye, through

diamonds and vapour

with your wanderlust mind.

Please, Luce, say you’re up there,

that you didn’t fall—plummet to Earth

in a cruel wake-up call. Oh Lucy,

please hear me,

’cause I’m trying to reach you

and they’re saying

you’re long gone away!

***

This poem alludes to two songs: “Lucy in the Sky with Diamonds” by the Beatles, and “When I’m Small” by Phantogram. Both songs mention a Lucy, though in very different circumstances, and that disparity was how this poem was born. I basically asked myself, Is Lucy in the sky, or underground? And this was born. It’s part experiment, part hot mess, but I hope it’s able to resonate with you in some way.

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#challenge

#poetry

#freeverse

#freeversewithsporadicrhyme