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This is a collaboration prompt. Offer up a piece (poem or flash fiction) to be revised by another person on prose. (you may tag your preferred revisers). I want to see both the original and the revised version(s)! (is this confusing? okay, first time I am posting a prompt here)
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BookofFeathers

Music

(open to revision by anyone)

Music makes life worth living

Music can do amazing things to us

Music has a soul that can bond with yours

Music can make you smile

Music can make you cry

Music can make you silent in awe

Music makes memories

Music is something no one can take away from you

Music can give the empty one's souls

There is no life without music and there is no music without life

There is no one without the other

Life is hard and cold

Music is escape and the fire of one’s soul