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This is a collaboration prompt. Offer up a piece (poem or flash fiction) to be revised by another person on prose. (you may tag your preferred revisers). I want to see both the original and the revised version(s)! (is this confusing? okay, first time I am posting a prompt here)
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writteninink

Hurricane

She was a storm of sorts

A tornado really

Destroying everything she touched

Never on purpose

It was just in her nature

He came along

Out of the blue

Swept up into her wind

Into this beautiful chaos

And sure there's other girls

Ones with no fierce winds

To scare away the fearful

But he'd rather be trapped

In the eye of her storm

Because without it

He would never be blessed

With the beauty of her light