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Do the double tanka with me! Two stanzas, five lines each, 5-7-5-7-7 syllable form each stanza (see my "Bonkers" for something of an example). Tag me, if you please! #doubletanka
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wanderer777 in Tanka

Boys to Men

Tears stream down his cheeks

As he remembers the day

He signed up for war

No understanding but dreams

Of the pride and the glory

Now stark black and white

Reality hits him deep

Sought goals disappear

Along with the blood that seeps

From other young men who dreamed