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Write about a friendship that has been slowly drifting apart. A friendship where on gave his/her 100% while the other barely tried to put efforts, where one understood the other with one glance of the face while the other couldn't distinguish the simplest emotions of the first one, where the first one cared less because s/he already has many other friends while the other one barely had anyone to depend upon. Cover all these aspects and write a poem filled with angst. See if I could feel the pain in your words. Don't forget to tag me~
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thesleepclinic

When You Came

When you came

Like the welcome breeze in Summer

When you came and spread your warmth and happiness

Into my life

When you came

Like a lion, full of courage

When you came

Like fire, and consumed me

I realised what I had been searching for

The sky was no longer a dead end

The road dust no more

And I not alone

You made you world like your words;

Sweet colours painting pretty pictures

You made the world like your mind;

A mystery, a brief delicacy

You were the door left ajar

To some unseen world.

When you came

I knew you would be my

Last line in this brave romance.

@AMY